Topic: If you were a college president what changes that would you make
notes:
I want the thesis statement in the last line of the first paragraph and please mention the three changes in thesis statement ( interdiction )
I want the the changes mentioned in the first line in each paragraph for example the first and most change that I would make is that ……
in the conclusion please rewrite the thesis statement and summarize each paragraph and the last sentence will be the suggestion or recommendation
* I don’t want it sound very advance, I want simple with simple words as a second language speaker
thank you very much
