My topic is the relationship between parents and children in two culture( China, United states)
Need to write four or five paraphrase
Introduction paragraphs include hook sentence, background information,and the thesis statement)
Two or three body paragraphs (1.each body paragraph must start with general topic sentence. 2 each body paragraph must have the example to support your ideal.)
Here is my ideal, one different between china and united states is both family spent time on their children, but american parents play with children, Chinese parent usually watch them and make them safe.
Another one is the way to solve the problem between the children in two culture is different.
For the conclusion paragraphs, remind the differences to reader and personal thinking at the end of paragraphs.
Do not use big words and thinking easily because its for my ESL class.