While You Skipped Most Of The Details You Did Focus On The Gist Of The Paper

This is an article summary I did and it was returned to me because for the following:

1) While you skipped most of the details, you did focus on the gist of the paper.

2) I was able to see that you had pretty much copied a couple of sentences from each section, and changed a word or two. 

3) This means its not in your words, and is considered copying. What you should do is read the whole section and then write, in your own words, what it said.

Could you please help me fix this paper?  It must be 1500 to 1800 words in APA 6 format.

Attached is the article and what I did.

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